THE LIAM SMITH SHOW
                          The Determinator: Judgement This Day.
                                     By David Hopper

               EXT. INDUSTRIAL WASTE LAND PILED HIGH WITH SCRAPPED VECHILES,
               WRECKED BUILDINGS AND HUMAN CORPSES - Green computer writing
               comes up a letter at a time, stating the year is 2088.

                                   ARTURO VOICE OVER
                         Thirteenth November 2001, a date
                         that not many people would remember
                         in human history. The day the stock
                         market failed, the day the Internet
                         ground to a halt in 92% of the
                         world. It was the day things
                         happened that was never expected to
                         happen. The day Bill Clinton was
                         found in a strip joint watching a
                         pre recorded political debate
                         chaired by Margaret Thatcher,
                         Ronald Regan and Augusto Pinochet.
                         But it was also the day the nukes
                         fell, the day civilisation fell.

               The camera pans across some burning rubble, across a pile of
               human skulls, as a metallic foot comes crushing down on one.
               Purple laser shots are traded all over the place as various
               soldiers dressed like punks from the 1980's charge across the
               wasteland, taking cover where they can and shooting at their
               targets. The landscape is rocked with explosions.

                                   ARTURO [V.O]
                         The survivors of the bombs couldn't
                         come up with anything to call it,
                         but quickly tried to rebuild what
                         they could. They couldn't.

               The camera pans up the foot, the leg, the torso and finally a
               head - It's a Determinator, a killing machine meant for one
               thing, to strike out at humans and destroy them. The
               Determinator surveys the scene, and takes out four humans as
               they make a run across some open ground. Death is most
               definitely in the air, and having a field day trying to keep
               up with all the dead.

                                   DEATH
                         DAMN, I'M EXHAUSTED. LOOK, I CAN'T
                         GET TO EVERYONE IMMEDIATELY, IF
                         YOU'D ALL JUST CARE TO MAKE AN
                         ORDERLY LINE, I'LL BE WITH YOU IN A
                         MINUTE.

               Another Determinator is seen lying on the ground, legs gone
               and most of it's torso wrecked beyond repair.
               It struggles for it's gun as another human runs up and
               destroys the Determinator. It's hard to tell if anyone is
               actually winning this battle, fresh human corpses litter the
               battlefield, while Determinators stand their ground as humans
               charge them. A huge flying vechile, a Poacher Scavenger pulls
               up into the sky and starts raining fire onto the humans in no
               mans land. As quickly as it appeared, the Poacher Scavenger
               is stuck down as a missile completely destroys one of it's
               engines, it crashes down to earth destroying a large group of
               Determinators.

                                   ARTURO [V.O.]
                         From nowhere, these metal menaces
                         arrived, spreading death and
                         disease and other generic aspects
                         of genocide and mayhem. Thankfully
                         there was still a hope for
                         humanity.

               INT. REBEL HEADQUARTERS - the camera angle travels at the
               point of view of a person all the soldiers recognise and
               salute as he passes. Eventually the camera angle separates
               and we see the figure is in a long black overcoat, and is
               looking out over the insuring battle. The camera pans around
               to show a somehow older looking DREW FANGTASTIC. He turns
               around to look at a man behind him, who resembles BIPPO at
               around the age of forty or so. He even has similar clown
               makeup.

                                   ARTURO [V.O.]
                         However the last best hope for
                         humanity needed a lot of guidance.
                         A LOT of guidance.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         This was worse then even your
                         grandfather's friends thought it
                         could have gotten.

                                   BIPPO THE THIRD
                         So you keep saying each and
                         everynight there's a battle.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Yeah, but the only time I ever saw
                         combat like this was before I
                         became a vampire. And now of
                         course, I'm human again. Not that
                         it matters since all the pollution
                         has left so much black smoke, and
                         fog and smog that we can't see the
                         daylight anymore. I may as well
                         have stayed a vampire for what it's
                         worth.

               Bippo the third reacts like a child whose been told the same
               thing by his parents too many times to actually care about
               the subject anymore. Fangtastic is acting more like someone's
               grandfather who fought in World War two.

                                   BIPPO III
                         Yeah, yeah, we're supposed to
                         believe that there was once such a
                         thing as daylight. And Rain that
                         wasn't acid and that humans
                         actually hated each other and not
                         dedicated killing machines that
                         were out to eradicate them.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Yeah, well you got to hate
                         something, in the old days we just
                         had other countries to hate, entire
                         political systems to despise, and
                         now, most of Europe is underwater,
                         except bloody Germany, the people
                         who deserved it the most. Typical
                         lucky bastards.

                                   BIPPO III
                         We could always move to Russia, the
                         Determinators can't go there.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         That's because Russia is still in
                         the middle of a nuclear winter. We
                         warned them about those breakaway
                         countries having access to their
                         old military bases, but would they
                         listen? Noooooo.

               The two men leave the observation area and walk down the
               corridor again, passing several burning TV's used to
               entertain rather ill looking children. Fangtastic is still
               muttering obscenities about the Germans.

               INT. WAR ROOM - despite the name, the place is a dump. It
               looks more like a garage that had been converted into a games
               room, then left to rot before these guys took up residence.
               Two other men are present, waiting for them, KENEDY and
               KEITHS. They salute BIPPO III. Everyone sits down at the
               table, which is covered in beer bottles.

                                   BIPPO III
                         At ease.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         How goes the bottling of petrol
                         bombs?

               Keiths burbs loudly, falls over and tries to stagger into his
               chair again.

                                   KENEDY
                         Quite well sir.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                             (narrows eyes)
                         Yes, I see that. What is the latest
                         report?

                                   KEITHS
                         We managed to destroy another
                         factory producing Determinators,
                         and defeated five squads of, of, of
                         those flying things.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Excellent, that brings us up to how
                         many factories in total now?

                                   KENEDY
                         Two sir.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Exceptional. Sir? A word please?

               Fangtastic hides his dislike for the two idiots to the very
               best of his abilities. He takes Bippo off to a side.

                                   BIPPO III
                         What's with that strange thing your
                         doing with your mouth?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         It's called wincing and trying to
                         make it look like a smile. We are
                         losing this war, even if we are
                         gaining ground we are not denting
                         their armaments or their ability to
                         back themselves up. It takes us
                         twelve years to get some rather
                         pimply reinforcements who are a bit
                         on the short side. It takes them
                         two days.

                                   BIPPO III
                         I know, I know, but what can we do?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Hire better planners?

                                   BIPPO III
                         What's wrong with Kenedy and
                         Keiths?

               In the background, Keiths burps yet again, throws up, farts,
               follows through and falls off his chair. Kenedy sits there
               with a dormant expression before the fumes overcome him and
               he too falls.

                                   BIPPO III
                         Ok, you may have a point there.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         I'll try to contain that mess.

               Fangtastic picks up some papers from near Keiths, goes to
               wipe up the mess, catches a glimpse of the papers and reads
               them instead. A look of horror crosses his face.

               MUSCIAL STING
               FADE OUT 
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               THEME SONG
               Some songs
               are very, very long
               This one isn't.
               OLÉ! 
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               THE LIAM SMITH SHOW
               STARRING
               
			   Dian Bachar as "Liam Smith"
               John Rhys Davis as "Profesor Arturo"
			   
               GUEST STARRING
               Michael Nelson as "Thad Coffey"
               Robert Floyd as "Bippo the clown/Bippo the third"
               The Stick as "Harry the handyman"
               David Hopper as "Drew Fangtastic"

               SPECIAL GUEST STARS
			   
               Arnold Schwarzenegger as "The Determinators #1 and #2"
               Antony Hopkins as "Mr Hopkins"
               Emma Thompson as "Miss Thompson"
               Hugh Grant as "Smedley"
			   
               SPECIAL PROSTICALY ENHANCED GUEST STARS
			   
               Freddie Prinze Junior as "Decoy"
               Craig Charles as "Keiths"
               Robert Lywelyn as "Kenedy"
               and Chris Barrie as "Lord Edgy"
			   
               WITH TRUELY AWEFUL ATTEMPTS AT ENGLISH ACCENTS
			   
               Rider Strong as "Rupert #1"
               Christopher Gorham as "Rupert #2"
               Ezziah Woods as "Rupert #3"
               AND SPECIAL APPERANCES BY
               Christopher Lee as the voice of "Death"
               and Frank Welker and Peter Cullen
               as the voices of "Megatron" and "Optimus Prime"

               EXT. UPPDA CREEK APARTMENTS - the camera follows BIPPO THE
               CLOWN as he makes his way down the street. Fangtastic and
               Bippo the third continue their conversation in the future
               with a voice over.

                                   FANGTASTIC [V.O.]
                         Somehow the machines got to know
                         about your descent sir. They've
                         sent a machine after your
                         grandfather.

                                   BIPPO III [V.O.]
                         Well good luck to them, he died
                         before I was born, before the war
                         actually. In fact, I don't even
                         know where he was buried.
                             (a beat)
                         Or if he even WAS buried.

                                   FANGTASTIC [V.O.]
                         Er no, sir, you misunderstand.
                         They've sent a Determinator into
                         the past to kill him.

                                   BIPPO III [V.O.]
                         Time travel is possibly? Could they
                         really have sent someone after the
                         most noble man of all time? You
                         were there, weren't you? At the
                         start?

               Bippo spies a lady on a street corner and waves at her, she
               waves nervously and runs when he's past her. Bippo pulls out
               a notebook and writes in it. A close up reveals the title is
               "People to kill, volume IV". Bippo is still making his way
               down the street. He spies a young woman trying to lift her
               baby's pram onto the sidewalk. He goes off to help.

                                   FANGTASTIC [V.O.]
                         Yes, I was there when the news was
                         broken. The software that
                         revolutionised the world, quite an
                         achievement.
                         But since it was all ran on an
                         Apple Macintosh, everyone started
                         buying their stock very quickly,
                         and everyone lost interest in PC's.
                         Microsoft went bust, the market
                         collapsed in on it's self, Bill
                         Gates went into hiding and some
                         idiot sent off a whole load of
                         nukes at every major country by
                         accident. Two years later as
                         humanity tried to recover, the
                         machines arrived. And life has been
                         hell ever since.

                                   BIPPO III [V.O.]
                         Why are you telling me this? I Know
                         all of this from history class.

                                   FANGTASTIC [V.O.]
                         Sorry, sir, for some strange reason
                         I keep getting these urges to
                         recount the sorry tale of our
                         existence today.

               Bippo places one hand on the axle and lifts up the pram onto
               the sidewalk, then stands to get thanks from the woman, who
               screams as his arm is left behind holding onto the axle. She
               takes off running, with the fake wooden arm still dangling
               from her axle.

               INT. WAR ROOM - cleaner then it was before, both Keiths and
               Kenedy are gone.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         As you know sir, your great
                         grandfather managed to organise the
                         rabble that was left and organised
                         a counter strike. Well, actually he
                         grabbed a big gun and ran screaming
                         at the enemy, but the people got
                         the idea. He kept the rebel
                         movements going for forty years.

                                   BIPPO III
                         Ah yes, right up to his famous
                         dissapering clown trick.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         He trod on a mine. Anyhow, now the
                         enemy knows about him, and somehow
                         they've found a way to travel back
                         in time and they want to kill him.

                                   BIPPO III
                         Why should I be worried about what
                         they do in the past?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         If they kill your grandfather, they
                         cancel out your existence. There
                         would be no one left to organise
                         the troops as he did before, and
                         without him, your father would not
                         be born, nor you.

                                   BIPPO III
                         How'd you get that then?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         What?

                                   BIPPO III
                         That I wouldn't be around if they
                         killed my grandfather off?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                             (not very quietly)
                         Oh god, I knew it was a mistake not
                         to let your teachers give you the
                         birds and the bees talk.
                             (a beat)
                         Put simply sir, if you wish to
                         live, we must send back a warrior,
                         a man of cunning, wit, guile,
                         strength, skill. Someone who could
                         stand a chance against a
                         Determinator one on one, without
                         weapons.

                                   BIPPO III
                         You know someone like that?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         No, everyone here is malnourished
                         and underweight. We'll just have to
                         pick lots and send which ever idiot
                         wins.

               EXT. A BIKER BAR - a calm night, country music is playing the
               night away. Then it happens, a bolt of purple lightning
               strikes in-between two bikes, and a sphere appears,
               physically growing bigger and cutting large holes into the
               classic bikes that is more then likely going to give the
               owners heart attacks when they see the damage.
               A very large, and naked man is all that is left as the sphere
               vanishes as quickly as it arrived. He stands up. This is the
               DETERMINATOR. He looks around.

               DETERMINATOR'S POV - the bikes that are in working order are
               scanned in the night vision as it approaches the bar.
               Suddenly, the juke box get's thrown out of the window.

                                   VOICE
                         Ah can't stand that crap.

               INT. THE BAR - the bikers are drinking, puking, playing pool
               or pinching the waitresses butts. She slaps the last one that
               does that and walks off, only to see the butt naked
               Determinator and can't help but look at his lack of man hood
               before falling over laughing, onto a rotweiler that savages
               her.

                                   BIKER #1
                         Man, you must need those glasses if
                         your gonna pinch HER butt.
                             (he realises everyone else
                              is looking behind him)
                         What ya looking a-
                             (he turns, the
                              Determinator is behind
                              him)
                         The hell is going on here? Stripper
                         gram? I ordered a woman. Now you
                         may be hung like a baby carrot, and
                         have boobs bigger than my fat wife,
                         but that don't make you a woman in
                         my book.

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         I need your clothes, your boots,
                         unt your motorcycle. Gift dem to
                         me.

                                   BIKER #1
                         Well ah'm busy using them right
                         now. But I could do with a new
                         leather jacket
                             (pulls out a flip knife)
                         Reckon I'll just make it out of
                         that nice hide of yours.

               He stabs his knife into the Determinator, with no effect. The
               biker looks puzzled, then the Determinator goes into action
               mode, grabbing the bikers arm, and snapping it clean off. The
               biker looks at his arm, and the stump where it used to be in
               amazement for a brief second, then screams.

                                   BIKER #1
                         AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH! 
                             (a beat)
                         I hate when that happens.

                                   BIKER #2
                         Hey, I know where I seen this scene
                         before, just get the guns fellas,
                         nothing else will work.

               Everyone pulls out a gun, and starts blasting away at the
               Determinator, blasting huge sections of flesh away from it's
               endostructure.

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         Zis is not helping me vith my
                         priority mission.

                                   WAITRESS
                         HAW, now he's got even less
                         manhood.

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         Right, zat does it.

               EXT. BAR - high levels of screaming are heard as the
               Determinator goes to town. It's silhouette is seen as it
               lifts three Bikers over it's head and throughs them out of a
               wall.

               EXT. BAR - The Determinator comes out, decked out in all
               leather. Leather jacket, t-shirt, pants, boots and presumably
               underwear. It tries to walk down the steps, but the trousers
               won't bend, until we hear a ripping noise and the
               Determinator walks down with ease and sits on a bike that it
               puts the keys into. The land lord comes out with a rocket
               launcher in his hands, and fires a warning shot in the air.
               Both the Determinator and the Land lord watch as the rocket
               goes up. Gravity being gravity, the rocket comes back down to
               earth on a highway, destroying an oil tanker which lights up
               the night sky. They return their gazes to each other, and
               shrug.

                                   LAND LORD
                         Can't let you take the mans bike
                         son. I could let you rip his arm
                         off, and beat my best customers to
                         death , steal their clothes, rob
                         them of their dignity and take
                         their guns, but the line must be
                         drawn here, this far, no further.
                         No get those hands where I can see
                         them.

               The Determinator get's off the bike, puts it's hands over
               it's head and moves towards the Land Lord.

                                   LAND LORD
                         That's it god damn you.

               The Determinator stops, looks up over the distance to cover,
               and jumps right up to the Land Lord, head butts him so hard
               we not only hear a cracking noise, but see him go flying into
               the wall. The Determinator takes the Land Lords shades and
               gun, steps down the steps, get on the bike and dives away
               into the night.

                                   LAND LORD
                         Errrr, that'll do nicely sir.

               INT. UPPDA CREEK APARTMENTS - LIAM, THAD and BIPPO are all
               about to go into Thad's room to go and have a guy's night in,
               when ARTURO bursts in before they can close the door with a
               newspaper in hand.

                                   ARTURO
                         Boys, have you heard the news?
                         There's been a massacre at a bikers
                         bar.

                                   BIPPO
                         Those tend to happen a lot when the
                         Hell's Angels are in town.

                                   THAD
                         The Hell's Angels Aren't in town
                         though.

                                   ARTURO
                         That's very true, but this didn't
                         even look as friendly as a Hell's
                         Angels hit, this was done by one
                         man, a very big man, described by
                         one waitress as looking "impotent".

               Arturo hands the papers to Liam.

                                   LIAM
                         Good grief, he tore someone's arm
                         off?

                                   BIPPO
                         I don't see any reason to worry
                         though. What are the chances he'll
                         be coming around here?

                                   LIAM
                         It says here he was last seen
                         heading towards Las Vegas on a
                         Harley.

                                   BIPPO
                         Okay, so what do I know? I'm just a
                         clown.

                                   ARTURO
                         I wish I could get that on tape.

                                   THAD
                         Say, look on the TV, it looks like
                         someone's got a real thing against
                         clowns.

                                   BIPPO
                         WHAT?

                                   TV
                         Police believe the clowns were
                         ordered to enter the car by a man
                         described as wearing enough rubber
                         clothing to go deep sea diving,
                         before it was blown up with a
                         rocket launcher.

                                   LIAM
                         Hey, this biker killer had a rocket
                         launcher. He stole it from the Land
                         Lord after beating him into a
                         bloody mess on the wall. The Land
                         Lord claimed he kept the launcher
                         in self defence as was his right as
                         a card carrying member of the NRA.

                                   ARTURO
                         Bippo, you could be in serious
                         trouble here.

                                   BIPPO
                         I know, my NRA membership fees are
                         due soon.

                                   LIAM
                         This reminds me of the movie that
                         was on last night, when a robot is
                         sent into the past to kill the
                         mother of the man who would save
                         humanity. It goes around killing
                         anyone with the same name as the
                         mother.

                                   THAD
                         That was a movie, Liam, this is
                         real life.

                                   LIAM
                         Yeah, but the cops thought it was
                         just a phonebook killer, someone
                         going through a whole section of
                         names in the phonebook. What if
                         we've got someone with something
                         against one clown, and to make sure
                         he gets him, takes as out as many
                         clowns as he can?

                                   BIPPO
                         So what did the saviour do?

                                   LIAM
                         Oh he sent a warrior of his own in
                         to protect his mother. Of course,
                         first he had to find her.

               EXT. A STATELY HOME IN ENGLAND - Three men in their early
               twenties or late teens are playing Croquet. One of them takes
               a shot, and misses the hoops, sending the ball flying into a
               greenhouse window. Only to be expected when your playing the
               game in the middle of the night.

                                   RUPERT #1
                         Oh bad luck Rupert.

                                   RUPERT #2
                         Thanks Rupert.

                                   RUPERT #3
                         Take another shot Rupert.

                                   RUPERT #2
                         Thanks Rupert, don't mind if I do.

                                   RUPERT #1
                         What do you think, Rupert, should
                         we have had the flood lights turned
                         on?

               A bolt of lighting strikes the ground, and another Sphere
               opens up right in front of the three Rupert's. The sphere has
               deposited the best warrior the resistance could find.
               SMEDLEY. He stands up and looks at the three men in front of
               him.

                                   SMEDLEY
                         Ah, yes, now, ah, I don't know how
                         to put this, but I need your
                         clothes, the woolly handstitched
                         Marks and Spencer's jumper will do
                         for starters, and perhaps if you
                         wouldn't awfully mind, your pin
                         striped trousers.

               This leaves two of the Rupert's somewhat baffled, while
               another Rupert, get's completely the wrong idea.

                                   RUPERT #3
                         I say, skinny dipping in your
                         fathers fountain, Rupert.

               The three Rupert's strip, and go dancing off towards the
               fountain. Smedley quickly dresses while wondering what kind
               of place he has arrived in.

               EXT. THE PORCH OF THE STATLEY HOME - Smedley is welcomed by
               the butler, Mr HOPKINS.

                                   HOPKINS
                         I do welcome you sir, have you an
                         appointment?

                                   SMEDLEY
                         Er, no, you see I'm here to protect
                         someone, a certain Mr Bippo from,
                         and this is the part that is very
                         hard to explain, from a homicidal
                         killing machine.

                                   HOPKINS
                         Ah, you're here to fix the vacuum
                         cleaner. Very good sir.

                                   SMEDLEY
                         Er no, you see-
                             (he stops and fumbles in
                              his pockets as he finds
                              something there)
                         What is this?

               Smedley pulls out a handgun which goes off accidentally,
               maiming Hopkins knee.

                                   HOPKINS
                             (no hint of pain at all)
                         Very good, sir, if you'd care to
                         walk this way.
                         Hopkins hobbles into the house,
                         followed by a very apologetic
                         Smedley.

                                   SMEDLEY
                         I'm terribly sorry about that, most
                         frightful accident. Doesn't that
                         hurt you?

                                   HOPKINS
                         Oh I understand it was an accident
                         sir. One mustn't complain when one
                         is only a mere butler. I have my
                         duties to perform.

               Hopkins continues to limp off, Smedley stops in his tracks,
               dumbstruck.

               INT. THAD'S APARTMENT - Liam, Thad and Bippo have got very
               drunk by now, and are starting to come close to passing out.

                                   LIAM
                         Say, I wonder where that killer got
                         to after killing those clowns?

                                   THAD
                         Probably looking for the nearest
                         collection of clowns he can find.

                                   LIAM
                         Say, Bippo, where is the largest
                         amount of clowns in Las Vegas?

                                   BIPPO
                         The local police station.

               MUSICAL STING

                                   LIAM
                         Say, did anyone hear something?
                         Like a, like a, like someone
                         playing the drums?

                                   THAD
                         No, but I could have sworn I heard
                         a motorcycle screech by at full
                         throttle, not brake in time and
                         crash into a bunch of bins.

                                   LIAM
                         Some kind of residual werewolf
                         thing, huh? Oh well, that's a
                         relief, for a second there I
                         thought I was hearing stuff.

               The door get kicked in, and the Determinator stands in the
               doorway, with a shotgun in hand.

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         Bippo Ze Clown?

                                   BIPPO
                         Bippo the clown? No, there's no one
                         here by that name. I mean look
                         around, do you see any clowns?

               The DETERMINATOR raises his gun at Bippo, who jumps out of
               the window in a desperate bid to survive. The Determinator
               opens up with his shotgun, punching big holes in the window
               frame seconds after Bippo made it through. Thad and Liam look
               out from the cover of the overturned couch. The Determinator
               sees them, turns and raises his gun. Thad gets to his feet
               and points towards the doorway.

                                   THAD
                         CLOWN!

               The Determinator turns and looks at the doorway, but sees
               nothing. Then turns around as we hear ripping and a low growl
               [out of shot]. The Determinator turns, just in time to see
               the werewolf pounce on him. Liam looks at the struggling
               figures of the werewolf and Determinator.

                                   LIAM
                         Thad? Thad? Oh boy.

               Liam looks out of the window for Bippo, but can't see him.

                                   LIAM
                         He must have landed on that pile of
                         dead animals that wasn't here
                         earlier today. I wonder if that was
                         his handiwork?

               Liam turns around to see the werewolf being thrown away from
               the Determinator who goes to pick up it's gun, only to be
               stopped by a swift strike to it's face by a steel mop. HARRY
               THE HANDYMAN is standing in the doorway, looking down at the
               cyborg as part of it's face is now torn off. The werewolf
               jumps past Harry and pounces down the hallway.

                                   HARRY
                         Holy, it's a cyborg.

                                   LIAM
                         A cyborg? Well that's just great,
                         we've got Thad on the lose now and
                         a psychotic killing machine bearing
                         down on us. And Bippo's on the
                         loose with his new hidden up-the
                         sleeve-knife collection.

               Harry grabs Liam and pulls him away from the Determinator as
               it gets back to it's feet and grabs it's gun. Harry and Liam
               race down the corridor as the Determinator jumps out of the
               window after Bippo.

                                   HARRY
                         What the hell is that thing doing
                         here?

                                   LIAM
                         I dunno, but it has an uncanny
                         resemblance to that biker and clown
                         killer. Even when it's missing half
                         it's face.

                                   HARRY
                         Then it's probably the same guy,
                         only he's not a guy, he's a
                         machine. An unstoppable killing
                         machine, most likely from the
                         future here to kill someone.

                                   LIAM
                         What makes you think he's from the
                         future?

                                   HARRY
                         Where else can it come from? No one
                         has the technology to make
                         something like that today.

                                   LIAM
                         What about the animatronics we see
                         everyday in films and movies, and
                         certain shops and casinos here?

                                   HARRY
                         Liam, they don't go around killing
                         people, well except by accident.
                         Come to think about it, they can't
                         walk without support, let alone
                         kick down doors. Doors that I'm
                         going to have replace in the
                         morning.

                                   LIAM
                         Wait, if that things from the
                         future, won't the people from the
                         future be sending a protector to
                         try to kill it?

                                   HARRY
                         Don't be daft, who would honestly
                         think of doing that?

               EXT. THE VEGAS STRIP -  The damaged Determinator is walking
               down the strip, scaring away prostitutes that see it's torn
               face. It's not even trying to hide it's guns, openly holding
               them, ready to shoot any clown. Decoy pulls up in the Decoy
               mobile.

                                   DECOY
                         Your the one whose been going
                         around murdering innocent people,
                         it's a pity Capeman isn't here, but
                         I am, so I'll stop you villain.

               The Determinator doesn't even pay a second thought to Decoy,
               it just lifts up it's machine gun, rests it pointing away
               from Decoy on it's shoulders, and squeezes off a shot.

                                   DECOY
                         HA! You missed, and now I'm going
                         to get medieval on your ass-

               The bullet richosase off a billboard, hits a moving car,
               bounce's off the wheel trim, collides with some pimps golds
               chain, hits a drain pipe, bounces off a gutter, hits a the
               supports of a movie sign which falls down on Decoy, squashing
               him flat.

               DETERMINATOR'S POV - Everything is red again, as the
               Derterminator scans Decoy's corpse. A readout of data comes
               up on screen. The words "Deader then Keanu Reeves acting
               abilities" flash up.

               EXT. THE STATELY HOME, ENGLAND - the Ruperts, two old men,
               and LORD EDGY are busy shooting pheasants with Smedley.
               Hopkins is nearby.

                                   EDGY
                         From the future eh? Here to rescue
                         someone from a fate worse then
                         death eh? Well, can't say I know
                         much about warfare. I fought the
                         Nazis in the last war, don't you
                         know, but they were never a real
                         test.
                         Of course now they own half the
                         bloody continent. You much good at
                         shooting pheasants, Smedley?

                                   SMEDLEY
                         Can't say I have really.

                                   EDGY
                         Well, maybe our other guest can
                         show you how it's down.
                             (to someone off screen)
                         Mr D? Come and show us how you do
                         it.

               Another Determinator walks on, dressed in an expensive suit
               like everyone else. Smedley can't believe it.

                                   EDGY
                         Ever done much pheasant shooting Mr
                         D?

                                   DETERMINATOR #2
                         Affirmative.

               The second Determinator takes out a mini gun and aims in the
               sky, firing continuously until it runs out of rounds.
               Hundreds of pheasants hit the ground. Determinator's POV -
               the pheasants litter the ground, while a counter records how
               many have been killed.

                                   DETERMINATOR #2
                         Four hundred and sixty two
                         thousand.

                                   EDGY
                         Damn, that's half me stock. Oh
                         well.

               A dog cocks it's leg on the Determintor's leg. The
               Determinator looks down at it, pulls out a small rocket
               launcher and blows up the dog. All that's left is the legs,
               smoking but still standing. Smedley blinks.

               INT. STATELY HOME KITCHENS - Hopkins is busy cleaning the
               various shoes of the house guest that are stacked up neatly
               on the kitchen table, including one pair with a pair of
               endostructure legs still in them. Miss Thompson approaches
               him.

                                   THOMPSON
                         Excuse me, Mr Hopkins, but is it
                         true that the new guest with the
                         strange German accent is here to
                         kill someone?

                                   HOPKINS
                             (friendly enough, he seems
                              to like her)
                         Miss Thompson, you must understand,
                         that as a servant it is not our
                         place to question our betters, be
                         they the Lord of the manor, his son
                         or their guests. Even if they are a
                         THX 90 killing machine, or a
                         bumbling English man with the habit
                         of finding guns he has no clue of
                         using who accidentally maims
                         members of staff with them.
                         Although I have informed our
                         Germanic guest how we respect his
                         countries Mr Hitler.

                                   THOMPSON
                         We do?

                                   HOPKINS
                         Well, you remember those two Jewish
                         servants the master had?

                                   THOMPSON
                         Oh. Yes, indeed I do. Quite nasty
                         really. That reminds me, Mr
                         Hopkins. Mr Smedley was talking to
                         your father and accidentally blew
                         his brains out with a gun he found
                         hidden in his sleeve.

               This actually takes Mr Hopkins back a bit, but he makes a
               good front of covering up his emotions.

                                   HOPKINS
                         Oh, well, I'll just carry on with
                         my work.
                             (a beat)
                         It's what he would have wanted.
                             (another beat)
                         I think.

               INT. THE TOMB OF LIBEARCHE - FANGTASTIC, looking very worn
               out, a cut down one side of his face, rather raggy looking
               clothing and a bandage over one hand is busy fixing the Timer
               from "Uprisings" it too looks battered. There's a thumping on
               the Tomb entrance., Fangtastic sighs, puts down the timer and
               opens the door. Daylight floods in and Fangtastic screams as
               he dives for the cover of the shadows. Liam, Harry and Bippo
               step in.

                                   HARRY
                         What's wrong with the Vampire?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         WHAT DO YOU THINK?
                             (he collects his wits)
                         I'm a Vampire, I tend to burn VERY
                         easily in direct sunlight.

                                   BIPPO
                         Can't you put up a curtain round
                         there or something, block out the
                         sunlight?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Can't get planning permission for
                         it, this is a listed grave. Anyhow,
                         what brings you lot here?

                                   LIAM
                         There's a killing machine that's
                         been sent to murder Bippo from the
                         future.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Bippo's from the future? I didn't
                         know that.

                                   HARRY
                         No, the machine is from the future,
                         Bippos from Earth.

               Everyone looks at Harry.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Bippos from Earth?

                                   BIPPO
                         You two take a bump on the head
                         each or something?

                                   LIAM
                         Oh and Thad took on the robot, he
                         took off his patch and he could be
                         anywhere now, tearing people apart.

                                   BIPPO
                         Sniffing butts.

                                   HARRY
                         Cocking his leg on hydrants.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Or looking for spare clothes.

                                   LIAM
                         What?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         It's morning, he'll be human again.
                         Won't he?

               There's a knocking on the tomb door again. Fangtastic hides
               in the shade as Bippo opens it. Thad runs in with a large
               over coat on.

                                   THAD
                         I was right, the only safe place I
                         could think of that you'd all go to
                         was here. Drew, you any clothes I
                         could borrow?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Huh, actually I'm in need of some
                         new clothes myself. I was going to
                         kill a few pimps tonight.

                                   HARRY
                         You were going to dress like a
                         pimp?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Good lord no, I was just going to
                         steal his wallet.
                             (a beat)
                         and maybe sleep with his whore.

                                   LIAM
                         Ho, Ho.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         You didn't have to laugh, it wasn't
                         a joke.

                                   BIPPO
                         I thought you killed prostitutes?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                             (caught)
                         I do... I kill them in bed... with
                         my technique.
                             (thinking)
                         Phew, thank god they didn't find
                         out what I've really been killing.

                                   BIPPO
                         You know, those bundles you've been
                         bringing to burn in the boiler room
                         really seem to be getting weirder.
                         Bumpier. I felt the forehead of one
                         while we were putting it in the
                         furnace and wow could you grate
                         cheese on it or what?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Oh that's because I'm being too
                         rough on the bodies when I kill
                         them. Anyhow Thad, why do you need
                         clothes?
                             (thinking)
                         Damn, the clown may know too much.
                         Which is a pity since I like him.
                         Reminds me of his great grandfather
                         back in World War One. Looks a lot
                         like him too, even with that make
                         up on. I wonder if I should tell
                         him some time that I knew him?

               Thad turns his back to the camera and opens his coat.

                                   BIPPO
                         OH MY GOD!

                                   LIAM
                         MY EYES!

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         PUT IT AWAY MAN!

                                   HARRY
                         Wow, bet the girls like you, eh?

                                   THAD
                         I had to er, borrow this from a bum
                         on the street. That is, I think it
                         was a bum, all that was left of him
                         when I woke up this morning was a
                         hand clutching a beer bottle. In my
                         mouth.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Gah, even I find that disgusting,
                         and I travel to alternate, er
                         venues, weird places, very strange
                         places and kill evil things that
                         deserve killing. I ever tell you
                         about this night club back home
                         called "the Village"?

               The village people's "YMCA" starts playing while the gang
               starts dancing to the tune.

                                   LIAM
                         So, I know you get Cowboys,
                         Indians, Construction workers and
                         the likes at the YMCA but a clown,
                         a werewolf and a vampire as well?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         That's the kind of crowd there at
                         "the Village" too, well people
                         dressed up like them maybe. And yes
                         they are very…
                             (a beat)
                         "happy" in an Eddy Izzard, Boy
                         George and Julian Clary kind of
                         way.

                                   THAD
                         What about clothes?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Not needed if your in wolf form I
                         guess.
                             (he goes over the last few
                              sentences in his head,
                              rolls his eyes and shakes
                              his head)
                         Oh clothes for him to wear. Erm,
                         well it's not like I'm the same
                         height or build.

                                   BIPPO
                         You said it shorty.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Five foot Eight is not short, it's
                         average. Just.
                             (a beat while his ego
                              recovers)
                         But I ought to be able to lend you
                         something. I might have to have it
                         taken back in a bit afterwards.

                                   LIAM
                         Now what about this robot? It's
                         locked onto Bippo and is trying to
                         kill him, it doesn't care who else
                         it get's.

                                   BIPPO
                         Say, are any boy bands doing any
                         gigs here? Maybe I could hang
                         around with one or two of the
                         groups.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         That's very noble of you, I'll fire
                         up the boiler. Other then that, I'm
                         useless, 'less you've got some
                         sunblock. You know I would help if
                         I could, but without sun block, no
                         way.

                                   HARRY
                         I've got some.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         FU -[BLEEP]- K! Okay, Thank you oh
                         so very much Harry. Thad, come with
                         me, I'll raid my wardrobe.

                                   LIAM
                         That pile of boxes over there?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         No, the other pile. On the tomb
                         itself.

               Sure enough, there's ten boxes piled up on Libearaches tomb.

                                   HARRY
                         Isn't that just a bit
                         disrespectful?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Well it's not like he's going to
                         complain.

               INT. UPPDA CREEK APARTMENTS ARTURO'S APARTMENT - Arturo is
               busy eating breakfast, when Liam barges in.

                                   LIAM
                         Mr Hilter, Mr Hilter, I- Hey, your
                         not Mr Hilter.

                                   ARTURO
                         Blistering idiot, Liam, I've been
                         in here for months since Mr Hilter
                         died and Donner tried to become
                         President, and Stacy turned out to
                         be a raving Welsh psychopath
                         killer.

                                   LIAM
                         Oh, yeah. I forgot. But… she's
                         always kinda been like that anyhow.

               Thad, Bippo, Harry and Fangtastic enter.

                                   ARTURO
                         Harry, where have you been? You've
                         got a new door to put up on Liam's
                         apartment, the looters nearly
                         cleaned him out of all his new
                         adult movies already before I could
                         stop them.

                                   LIAM
                         ALL MY ADULT MOVIES? KARI!
                         NOOOOOOO!!!!!!

               Liam takes off down the hall.

                                   HARRY
                         Sorry Professor, it's just last
                         night we all got caught up in the
                         attempt on Bippos life.

                                   ARTURO
                         Another one?

                                   THAD
                         I had to wolf out to get the guy
                         down.

                                   BIPPO
                         I had to jump out a window.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         I had to put up with them calling
                         at such an anti social hour.

                                   ARTURO
                         It's eleven AM, what are you doing
                         up at this hour? Shouldn't you be
                         in your coffin?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         We can be awake at anytime we
                         choose, I just stayed up late today
                         and had to drink five cans of cola
                         to give me a caffeine buzz to last
                         till night time.
                         And I sleep in a bed, the idea of
                         sleeping in a coffin is repulsive
                         and is only spread by idiots and
                         hack writers who have NO idea what
                         their talking about. We only use
                         those travel about in when we go to
                         another country. Sides, the only
                         coffin in my tomb is taken, and
                         there's no way I'm sharing with a
                         coffin with an occupant with his
                         reputation. He could suddenly
                         become a zombie and then I'm in
                         deep shi-

                                   ARTURO
                         Would you mind coming down off your
                         soap box, or rather, MY soap box,
                         please? So, you were all attacked
                         in Liam's room? That accounts for
                         the bullet holes and shotgun
                         cartridges I found all over the
                         place, but not the piece of ripped
                         off face I found bobbing in his
                         toilet which I've placed in my
                         freezer should the owner decide to
                         reclaim it.

                                   HARRY
                         My work.

                                   ARTURO
                         Yours? I was thinking it was going
                         to be his

               [points to Fangtastic]

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Hey now, I wasn't even in the
                         apartment when this happened. I was
                         in another dieme- er, my crypt,
                         resting, and then this morning they
                         come barging in begging for my
                         help. And in Thad's case a change
                         of clothes. You got any eye drops
                         on you? My eyes are still sore from
                         the shock of seeing Thad's wei-

                                   ARTURO
                         butting in
                         Yes, I was wondering where he'd
                         gotten all that leather from. A
                         most peculiar thing that, modern
                         day vampires being so interested in
                         that particular type of clothing.
                         I supposed the ripped look is in
                         now within the vampire circles is
                         it?

                                   HARRY
                         Professor, we need your help you've
                         been on many different worlds, seen
                         many different things, have you any
                         idea how to stop this cyborg
                         assassin?

                                   ARTURO
                         Well I- Cyborg? Are you serious?

                                   HARRY
                         How many people could survive the
                         shock of having their face removed
                         and continue to fire a gun in such
                         a professional manner?

                                   THAD
                         A zombie?

                                   BIPPO
                         A vampire?
                             (beat)
                         Sorry Drew.

                                   ARTURO
                         Well as it happens Mr Smith, I do
                         know just who to call in on this
                         matter.

               EXT. UPPDA CREEK - a huge Red Truck with a grey trailer is
               parked outside. The gang hang around it waiting for the
               driver to step out.

                                   LIAM
                         This is it? A trucker? What's he
                         going to do? Belch in the cyborgs
                         face? Chloroform him with his
                         armpits?

                                   HARRY
                         You know Drew, the sun really seems
                         to be bringing out the colour in
                         your cheeks. You should try getting
                         out more often.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Hmm, I am starting to feel the
                         sun's rays a bit, I need a bit more
                         sun block, Harry you got any more?

                                   HARRY
                         No.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         No? What do you mean no? It was a
                         full bottle.

                                   HARRY
                         I gave it to that bum on the
                         street.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         One minute people, I've a bum to
                         beat.

                                   LIAM
                         So professor, how is some guy in a
                         truck going to help us?

                                   ARTURO
                         You might want to ask your friends
                         over there.

                                   LIAM
                         Drew?

               He looks over to where Fangtastic has just grabbed the Bum
               and is dragging the guy down a shady street.

                                   ARTURO
                         No, Thad and Bippo.

                                   LIAM
                         Thad and Bippo? But why?

               In answer, Liam turns around and sees for the first time that
               both Thad and Bippo are staring at the truck.

                                   THAD
                         It can't be? Can it?

                                   BIPPO
                         It must be, it must be.

               Suddenly. much to Liam and Harry's shock, the cab section
               starts to fall apart, all done in super expensive CGI. That
               is, the headlight sections swing out forming arms, the lights
               retract blue hands replace them. The wheels retract and
               panels cover them, forming what appears to be legs. Finally a
               blue head pops up on the shoulders, and the trailer is
               inexplicably missing. The Robot of course is-

                                   OPTIMUS PRIME
                         I understand you have a problem,
                         and that you think only I can help?

                                   THAD & BIPPO
                         YAY!

               A screaming noise is heard as the Bum is obviously beaten
               severely by Fangtastic.

                                   LIAM
                         I thought he was a cartoon
                         character?

                                   ARTURO
                         Propaganda machine, to allow the
                         citizens of America to accept the
                         Autobots for what they are, heroes.
                         While the Decepticons are portrayed
                         as evil bumbling idiots. It went
                         down a storm back in the eighties,
                         surprised you didn't know anything
                         about it.

                                   HARRY
                         Mr Prime, sir, I was always such a
                         big fan of your work. Your work to
                         protect Earth from the evil
                         dictatorship of the Decepticons, at
                         the expense of losing your own
                         homeworld last year, shows your
                         commitment to protecting us, and
                         not caring about the views and
                         opinions of your own men. Even
                         having your girlfriend dump you the
                         way she did. Your an example to us
                         all. Your nearly as a big a hero to
                         me as John Wayne is.

                                   PRIME
                         Er, thanks. I think.
                             (a beat)
                         So what's the story?

               FANGTASTIC comes back on rubbing a blood stained sun block
               container on himself. He spots Prime, whimpers and faints.

                                   LIAM
                         Mr Prime sir, can I ask a question?
                         How can a robot from another planet
                         have such a pronounce Texan accent?

                                   PRIME
                         You know, I've always wondered
                         about that. Although that said,
                         Ironhide's ALWAYS sounded like that
                         since I first meet him, twelve
                         million years ago.

                                   LIAM
                         Whose Ironhide? I was talking about
                         you. And don't exaggerate your age.

               EXT. Further down the Vegas Strip - the Determinator is
               walking down the street, when a grey robotic arm comes into
               view and grabs it, pulling it into an alley.

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         Let me go or I shall Determinate
                         you.

                                   MEGATRON
                         I don't think so, my strangely
                         accented prisoner. I have something
                         of a preposition for you.

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         I make no deals vith anyvon.

                                   MEGATRON
                         Ah, but I think you'll find I have
                         something that will work in your
                         advantage. I know you want to kill
                         the clown up there, and I want to
                         kill that over popular, hyped up
                         idiotiotic ignoramus, pompous,
                         puffed up, politician, Optimus
                         Prime. But if I approach him, he'll
                         see me and kick my ass like he does
                         all the time.

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         Somethink of a dilemma zere. Vhat
                         is your plan?

                                   MEGATRON
                         I am going to transform into my gun
                         mode, when I'm in that mode I will
                         set my self to maximum, allowing me
                         to fire a concentrated nuclear
                         fusion blast directly at Prime.
                         This will damage him severally,
                         possibly causing him to fall on all
                         those humans that he cares for so
                         much automatically, regardless of
                         who they are, or maybe, killing
                         them all. And even if my shot
                         doesn't kill him, he'll be so
                         demoralised by having been
                         responsible for the deaths of so
                         many innocent humans, he will have
                         no choice but to resign as leader
                         of the Autobots, and then I will
                         conquer the universe. Mwaha!
                         Mwhahahaha! Mwhahahahaha!

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         But if he iz a leader of unt
                         faction, surely a varrior vill vise
                         from zere ranks, unt assume
                         command, allowing zem to beat you?

                                   MEGATRON
                         Yes, but most of his men are
                         idiotic boobs, incomprehendable
                         bores, pacifists, retards,
                         beuracrats, politicians or in one
                         case, possibly a practising
                         homosexual. With those kinds of
                         odds, against my backstabbing,
                         dubious, cowardly cretins, I can
                         easily win this war, but not with
                         him in command of the Autobots. All
                         I need you to do, is point me, and
                         fire.

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         Vhy not fire yourself?

                                   MEGATRON
                         I can't do that, strange design
                         flaw. I need you
                         to…pull…my…trigger.

               DRAMATIC MUSIC

                                   DETERMINATOR
                         Zat zing hanging in-between your
                         legs?

                                   MEGATRON
                             (sighs)
                         Yes, that thing in-between my legs.
                         Wait! Not that thing in-between my
                         legs. Did that get out again?

               Megatron's free hand disappears out of shot, and a zipping
               sound is heard.

                                   DETERMINANTOR
                         It is most fortunate for you zat I
                         am not programmed vith a sense of
                         humour, else I would be belittling
                         you vith a series of badly chosen
                         puns.

                                   MEGATRON
                         Don't bother, I've heard them all
                         from the fans on the net. "Pull my
                         trigger", bah. Do we have a deal?

                                   DETERMINANTOR
                         Affirmative.

                                   MEGATRON
                         Excellent. Mwah Ha, Ha Ha Ha, Mwah
                         Ha Ha! HA!

               Megatron transforms and shrinks into his handgun mode, the
               Determinator, still several feet up in the air, falls
               heaverly, busting one of it's legs. It picks up Megatron and
               limps towards Prime and the gang.

               EXT. UPPDA CREEK - Prime has just been told the full story,
               and is contemplating it.

                                   PRIME
                         Well, I've had time to think it
                         over, now all I have to do is come
                         up with a plan that will exactly
                         allow for every possibility this
                         killer could decide to make. And
                         come up with a plan that will allow
                         me to defeat whichever plan it
                         decides to proceed with.

                                   LIAM
                         Your going to do what then?

                                   PRIME
                         Take a wild leap in logic, based on
                         absolute no evidence given to me by
                         yourselves in the course of our
                         conversation.
                         I will then act on this gut
                         instinct of mine, defeat the enemy,
                         save the day, pull a vaguely funny
                         joke, watch my popularity with the
                         fans increase more, possibly past
                         the demi god status I currently
                         have now amongst humans and my own
                         troops, and somehow still remain
                         humble.

                                   ARTURO
                         Prime, what's the most likely thing
                         this cyborg will do then?

                                   PRIME
                         The most likely thing it will do is
                         kill every clown it can, until it
                         finds Bippo, or is satisfied it
                         must have gotten him. In which case
                         it would be safer to have you under
                         armed guard and surveillance 24/7.
                         However since most of my army got
                         wiped out by another god like being
                         last week, again, and are in status
                         chambers until we can figure out a
                         way to get spare parts, or
                         resurrect with some wonder chemical
                         that has some strange side effect
                         that will allow for a whole new toy
                         line to be developed. I'm going to
                         just let you stay out in the street
                         and try to tempt him out with you
                         as bait.

               BIPPO and THAD are too paralysed with star struck glee to
               take any notice of anything Prime is saying.

                                   LIAM
                         Then you kill it?

                                   PRIME
                         No, I will try to reason with it,
                         machine to machine.

                                   LIAM
                         Why?

                                   PRIME
                         Because it's my usual tactic, and
                         it's worked in the past. Actually,
                         it's never worked in the past. I'll
                         just shoot it.

                                   HARRY
                         Here's your chance, he's limping up
                         the street right now.

               Sure enough, the Determinator is doing just that, and raising
               his gun at Prime. Bippo snaps out of his trance in time to
               see this and panics.

                                   BIPPO
                         OH GOD! SOMEBODY SAVE ME! I'M TOO
                         YOUNG TO DIE! PLEASE GOD SAVE ME!

                                   PRIME
                         Wait, that gun in his hands, it
                         couldn't be. Megatron?

               SFX SHOTS - The gun fires, everything goes slow motion. The
               Determinator pulling the trigger. Prime pulling his gun out
               of thin air. The spark in Megatron's barrel as the blast is
               released. Prime levelling his gun. The blast leaving the
               barrel. Bippo running around in circles behind Prime as he
               squeezes off a shot. Liam, Arturo, Harry and Thad running for
               cover away from Prime. Bippo running around still. Fangtastic
               waking up. From his point of view, we see Prime get nailed
               full on by the fusion blast and Primes own shot hit the
               Determinator full on, setting it alight. Megatron the gun
               goes flying in the air. As Prime falls he takes another shot,
               it scythes through the air. Megatron begins to Transform and
               gets hit midway into robot mode by Primes shot. Both robots
               fall down with a couple of almighty thumps, measuring four on
               the Richter scale, Prime narrowly missing Bippo who moves out
               of the way just in time, only to run back into Prime in his
               mad eccentric circle. Fangtastic gets up and looks around to
               see that he's in-between Primes legs.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Whoah. Oh damnit, now I'm talking
                         like Keanu Reeves.

                                   THAD
                         OPTIMUS PRIME! Oh please, don't be
                         dead, don't be dead.

                                   BIPPO
                         He gave his life so I could live
                         mine. Anyone want to see me burn
                         down a famous building to remember
                         him by?

                                   LIAM
                         Hey, least that killing machine got
                         wasted too, but that other robot is
                         still up and about.

                                   MEGATRON
                         Blast, even dying he has perfect
                         aim. Of all the luck, he got the
                         most. Oh well, farewell Optimus
                         Prime, you were always a worthy
                         opponent, pity you won't be around
                         any more because now I'm free to
                         suck this planet dry of energy.

               Prime sits up and points his gun at Megatron. Megatron is
               furious.

                                   PRIME
                         Actually Megatron, as usual it
                         turned out that you forgot about
                         one very important thing.

                                   MEGATRON
                         Blast, what the hell is it this
                         time? Did the sunlight bring you
                         back to life this time? You've got
                         more lives then a cat. Oh go on,
                         tell me, tell me.

                                   PRIME
                         Sorry Megatron, it'll be a cold day
                         in hell before I tell you that. The
                         day I die, will be the day a huge
                         monster planet decides to eat our
                         homeworld. Well, that or the day
                         the Autobots are led by our answer
                         to a teenager while the Decepticons
                         are led by a raving psychotic.

                                   MEGATRON
                         BWAAAAAH! Wait, what am I saying?

               A grand Piano suddenly falls on top of Primes head, knocking
               him out.

                                   MEGATRON
                         ... the hell?

               Everyone looks up to see a small portable crane with a
               snapped rope floating in the breeze. A workman pops his head
               out of a window in a building the piano was supposed to be
               delivered to. Megatron fly's off, Superman style. Prime lies
               comatose on the street.

                                   MEGATRON
                         This town is far too weird for my
                         liking.
                         I'd better get out of here, I left
                         Starscream in charge of the
                         Decepticon headquarters. Knowing
                         him, he's either plotting my
                         downfall or forcing the rest of my
                         army to dance to the greatest hits
                         of The Village People. If I never
                         hear him playing that blasted YMCA
                         song again, it'll be too soon.
                         Primus, I hope he's not playing the
                         navy song. The last time he did
                         that Soundwave started crying and I
                         had to put his kids to bed. I've
                         never seen so much Pokemon crap in
                         one room before.

                                   LIAM
                         Oh sh-[bleep]-t, what are we going
                         to do now?

                                   THAD
                         Leave him here to recover, it's not
                         like anyone is going to mess with a
                         forty odd foot robot now is it?

                                   ARTURO
                         Besides, if he's died all we have
                         to do is wait for someone on his
                         team to rebuild him. Again.

                                   HARRY
                         Come on, lets go inside. The latest
                         Kari Wuher sex flick is on, "Busty
                         the Vampire lover."

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Vampire Slayer?

                                   HARRY
                         No, no, LOVER!

               Everyone heads off to Liam's rooms to watch Kari Wuher stick
               something inside a bunch of vampires, or is that the other
               way around?

                                   LIAM
                         You know, if there's one thing I
                         can't figure out is this. If they
                         sent back a killer from the future
                         to kill you, how would they know if
                         a change was made to the timeline?
                         And how did they get that
                         technology?

                                   ARTURO
                         My boy, there's a simple
                         explanation for all this. Time
                         Paradox.

               Liam smiles. Everyone goes off happy at that simple
               explanation, and the fact that their going to see Kari Wuher
               naked. The camera stops on Fangtastic for a second as he
               thinks deeply about something.

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         Should I tell them that I
                         encountered one of those things
                         back in the 80's?

                                   THAD
                         Hey, Drew, you coming to see Kari
                         Wuher get her kabamas out?

                                   FANGTASTIC
                         COMING!

               INT. A ENGLISH MANOR HOUSE - the other Determinator stands
               over a pile of dead bodies, including the staff, all
               Rupert's, Smedley and Lord Topper.

                                   DETERMINATOR #2
                         I vill come for you, Bippo zee
                         clown. Unt vhen I have killed you,
                         you von't be back. Ever.

               EXT. UPPDA CREEK APARTMENTS, LIAM APARTMENT WINDOW - Harry
               opens the window to take a look at how Prime is doing.

                                   HARRY
                         Er, guys, how angry do you reckon
                         Optimus is going to be when he
                         finds out his wheels are gone?

               THE END
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